eh, there’s more to her writing that’s bad. she has a lot of plot points that go nowehere, seems to set a lot of stuff up with no payoff.
also she uses adverbs a lot. that “he asked calmly” meme is an example. it’s generally not advised in writing to rely on them too much, and she uses like double the amount of adverbs a good writer would use.
and of course her attempts at tying loose ends always makes them worse.
and she pretty vile. you can see it in her descriptions.
eh, there’s more to her writing that’s bad. she has a lot of plot points that go nowehere, seems to set a lot of stuff up with no payoff.
also she uses adverbs a lot. that “he asked calmly” meme is an example. it’s generally not advised in writing to rely on them too much, and she uses like double the amount of adverbs a good writer would use.
and of course her attempts at tying loose ends always makes them worse.
and she pretty vile. you can see it in her descriptions.
oh and she’s awful at naming things and people.